Link to Copper Wire: http://www.scribblersandinkspillers.com/copperwire.html
Direct link to story: http://www.scribblersandinkspillers.com/copperwire/bloodwedding.html
Let me know what you think. :)
And in other news, I now have a proofreader! Woot! Someone to catch the mistakes my diseased brain makes. Sorry, loyal blog followers, I'm not paying her to proofread my posts here. You'll just have to be compassionate and understanding. :p
Yes, she's already caught the it's/its mistake I made on the website. Homonyms are the worst things for me to catch. And I DO know the correct one to use, the glitch in the brain synapses chooses the wrong one. The only solution is to hire a proofreader for my work.